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I miss...
The day I've decided to embark an adventure and move to another country, maybe to break the monotony of the life I was living or maybe to prove my parents wrong, I m not sure. That day I didn't know that in the future I was going to pay the price for taking the important things for granted.
I miss my country, I miss my family and it hurts me deep inside that my kids are growing without them close by. I miss the flavors, I miss the smells, I miss the colors, I miss the noise and feel of warm hugs. I miss the music, a miss the food, I miss my friends, and I miss my mom, I miss feeling that I belong, I just miss being at home...
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Same here Ari....I feel you...huhuhuhu!
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Stay strong. :)
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Hi Ari. I wish I know how you're feeling but I don't.
I've never been in another country or far from my parents. The only time I was away from my parents was my university days and even then, we were just a few kilometers away from each other.
You have just made me more conscious about this fact and I'm gonna enjoy my time here just in case life pushes me elsewhere.
Thanks.
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Be strong Ari. I believe everything happens in purpose. I hope along the way you find your purpose and see the goodness of your decision. I wish you all the best!
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Thanks Everyone. Doreen yes the purpose was the beautiful family that I have. Thanks for the comments!!!!!
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Hi Ari. Wow, that a very tough decision but I believe you are stronger compared to your circumstances. :)
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Corrections
I miss...
I miss my country, I miss my family and it hurts me deep inside to know that my kids are growing up without
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I miss...
The day I've
decided
determined
to embark an adventure and
move
fly
to another country, maybe to
break
demolish
the monotony of the life I was living or maybe to
prove
convince
my parents wrong,
I m not sure.
That day I didn't
know
-appreciate
appreciate
that in the future I was going to pay the price for taking the
important
extraordinary
things for
granted
allowed
.
I miss my country, I miss my family and ithurts
bothers
me
deep
buried
inside that my kids are
growing
building
without them close by. I miss the
flavors
characteristics
, I miss the smells, I miss the colors, I miss the
noise
static
and feel of warm hugs. I
miss
fumble
the music, a
miss
crave
the food, I miss my friends, and I
miss
yearn
my mom, I
miss
desire
feeling that I belong, I just
miss
being
want
to
be
at home...
I miss my country, I miss my family and it
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I miss...
The day I
've
decided to embark
on
an adventure and
move
moved
to another country,
maybe
I
wanted
to break the monotony of the life I was living
or
maybe
to
and
perhaps
prove my parents wrong, I
'
m not sure.
That
On
that
day I didn't know
that
in
what
the future
had in store for me and that
I was going to pay
the
a
price
for
and
was
taking
the
some
important things for granted. I miss my country, I miss my family and it hurts me deep inside that my kids are growing
up
without
them close by
me
. I miss the flavors, I miss the smells, I miss the colors, I miss the noise and
feel
the
embrace
of
a
warm
hugs
hug
. I miss the music,
a
I
miss the food, I miss my friends,
and
I miss my mom, I miss
the
feeling
that
I belong
of
belonging
, I just miss
being at
home...
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