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I'm Bruno, I'm a software developer here in Sao Paulo in Brazil. I'm not from Sao Paulo, I come from a medium city in Bahia, Porto Seguro. This quiet city has around 120,000 inhabitants and beautiful beachs.

Many people go there in vacation to appreciate warm and sunny weather most of the year. Sao paulo is very big and rainy city. I can't wait to go there in my vacation, I love quiet and beautiful cities.

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I watched a movie called "Carnaval" on Netflix, which takes place in Salvador, another port, which is about 400 km from Porto Seguro. It looks nice.
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Bahia
Hello, I'm Bruno , . I'm a software developer here in Sao Paulo in , Brazil. I'm not from Sao Paulo , . I come from a medium sized city in Bahia , called Porto Seguro. This quiet city has around 120,000 inhabitants and beautiful beachs beaches . Many people go there in on vacation to appreciate because of the warm and sunny weather there most of the year. Sao paulo Paulo is a very big and rainy city. I can't wait to go there in home for my vacation , . I love quiet and beautiful cities.
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