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We all love music, we all like listening to songs, everyone knows that. I particularly like to listen to songs almost all the time. My favorite musical rhythms are Country, hip-hop, Electronic, and more.

It is so good to listen to songs, I mean, every time I listen to songs I feel like I am in another world. It is so good. There are times when the song tells exactly what you feel. Even though you are in problems, You feel better after doing that. . I like doing it in different situations. For example, when I start to learn a language, I like to look for songs that are sung in that language, so I can do what I like to do and learn a language at the same time and that is so good.

People are different. They have different hobbies and kinds of things like that. People have a favorite song, a favorite band, kind of thing, they also have a favorite rhythm. Maybe, not everyone has a favorite song or band, but everyone likes songs, so let me know what you think about, and what is your favorite musical rhythm?

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Forever.Perfect
My advice is use the word "Music" instead of "Song"
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Forever.Perfect
By the way this essay is nice . But it would be great if you wrote this longer :))
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henryjsmith
Music
We all love music, we all like listening to songs, everyone knows that. I particularly like to listen to songs almost all the time. My favorite musical rhythms are Country [you can say "rhythms" but "genres" would sound more normal here] include country , hip-hop, Electronic, and more electronic . It is so good to listen to songs , ! I mean, every time I listen to songs I feel like I am in another world. It is so good. There are times when the song tells expresses exactly what you feel. Even though you are in problems difficulty , You you feel better after doing that listening . . I like doing it listening to music in different situations. For example, when I start to learn a language, I like to look for songs that are sung in that language, so I can do what I like to do and learn a language at the same time and . And that is so good . [I'd say "delightful"]! People are different. They have different hobbies and kinds of things like that. People have a favorite song, a favorite band, that kind of thing , they . They also have a favorite rhythm. Maybe, not everyone has a favorite song or band, but everyone likes songs, so let me know what you think about , and what is your favorite musical rhythm genre ? [Note: Rhythm refers to the beat, timing or percussive aspect of the song. I think you mean "genre".]
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Forever.Perfect
Music
We all love music, Everyone knows that we all like love listening to songs, everyone knows that music . I particularly like to listen to songs music almost all the time. My favorite musical rhythms are Country, hip-hop, Electronic, and more etc .

It is so good to listen to songs, I mean, every time whenever I listen to songs I feel like I am in another world. It is so good. There are times when Sometimes the song tells expresses exactly what you feel. Even though When you are in problems sad , You feel better after doing that. listening to music . Also, I like doing it in listen to music for different situations purposes . For example, when I start to learn a foreign language, I like listen to look for songs that are sung music in that language , so . So I can do what I like learn language by listening to do and learn a language at music. At the same time and that is so good I enjoy it very much .

People are different . They have different according to their hobbies and kinds of things like that tastes . People They have a different favorite song music , a favorite band, kind of thing, they also have a favorite rhythm bands and etc . Maybe, not everyone has a favorite song music or band, but everyone likes songs music , so let me know what you think about it , and what is your favorite musical rhythm?
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