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Life is lovely
I think we live our life really monotonously . Acting like robots , running after fake and materialistic pleasures. It does really ruin us in long run. Because all this fame and riches will go away with this fragile body. I think we should take up more free time from our life to enjoy nature , to talk to dear ones , to help not so fortunates , to thank every moment we have been given . Do you guys agree with me ? 😅
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I totally concur. Always be kind before hating, smile before frowning, help before condemning and most importantly live before dying 😀
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Life is
lovely
Lovely
I think we live our life really monotonously
. Acting like robots
,
(
running after
)
[chasing]
fake and materialistic pleasures. It does really ruin us in
the
long run. Because all this fame and riches will go away with
this
our
fragile body. I think we should
take
up
pass
more
of the
free time
from
in
our life
to
enjoy
enjoying
nature
,
to
talk
talking
to
dear
loved
ones
,
to
help
helping
the
not so
fortunates
,
to
thank
fortunate
and
being
thankful
for
every moment we have been given
. Do you guys agree with me ? 😅
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Thanks matey that's really nice to know where I'm being wrong
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