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My first essay


Hello my name is Joao, I am a language learner as well as an intern. Probably, if you have just read my name by first time, it was very hard to pronounce it, but don't worry about it, everyone misprounounced it, it's a very brazilian name. My essay can look a little strange and not so good, as a matter of fact, never have I written an essay before only in my native language of course, but I'm sure that as i go along training and dedicating , I believe that my writting will improve more and more, and I will be able to attain my goals in this great language.

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My first essay

Hello
, my name is Joao, I am a language learner as well as an intern. Probably, if you have just read my name by for the first time, it was very hard to pronounce it , but don't worry about it , everyone misprounounced . Everyone mispronounces it , as it's a very brazilian Brazilian name. My essay can look a little strange and not so very good , as . As a matter of fact, never I have I never written an essay before , only in my native language of course , but . But I'm sure that as i I go along training and dedicating with dedication , I believe that my writting writing will improve more and more, and I will be able to attain my goals in this great language.
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My first essay

Hello my name is Joao
, . I am a language learner as well as an intern. Probably, if you have just read my name by for the first time, you found it was very hard to pronounce it , but don't worry about it, everyone misprounounced mispronounces it , it . It 's a very brazilian Brazilian name. My essay can may look a little strange and or not so good, but as a matter of fact, never I have I never written an essay before only in my native language of course , but I'm sure that . But as i go along I continue training and dedicating , I believe that my writting writing will improve more and more, and I will be able to attain reach my goals in this great language.
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