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Today I'm going to talk about my house. I live in a neighborhood called Jardim Comodoro. I've been living here for 5 years. My house is very big and we also have land on the side. My house has grass and trees. My house is in the process of being built. I still need to paint, cover and buy some furniture. 
And my room doesn't have a lot of things. I just have a bed, a guitar, a wardrobe and a fan.
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 Home Theme.
 Today I'm going to talk about my house. I live in a neighborhood called Jardim Comodoro. I've been living here for 5 years. My house is very big and we also have land on the side. 
 My
 house
 The
 property
  has grass and trees. 
 My
 The
  house is in the process of being built. 
 I
 It
  still 
 need
 to 
 needs
 paint
 ,
 cover 
 and 
 I have to 
 buy 
 some 
 furniture. 
 And
 my 
 MY
 room doesn't have a lot of things
 .
 I 
 ,
 just 
 have 
 a bed, a guitar, a wardrobe and a fan.
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