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A walk in the park
Sue is in the park with friends . Your friends are playning footbal. She is walking around of the park and seeing a view. When finesh your walk her see a hurt dog. Running for your friends, she speak : " My friends I need of help. Do you help me?' " Yes, we do. Where?" She speak and they run for the dog. They call for veterinarian and describe a situation of the hurt dog. She want see the dog. They leave the dog for veterinarian's clinic.Vaterinarian see hurt dog and start our job.Sue and your friends are cryinyg . They are afraid for dog.
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A walk in the park
Sue is in the park with friends .
Your
Her
friends are
playning
footbal
playing
football
. She is walking around
of
the park and
seeing
looking
at
a view. When
finesh
your
she
finishes
her
walk
her
see
she
sees
a hurt dog. Running for
your
her
friends, she
speak
:
says,
"
My friends
,
I need
of
help.
Do
Can
you help me?
'
"
"
Yes, we
do
can
. Where?" She
speak
speaks,
and they run for the dog. They call
for
the
veterinarian and describe
a situation of
the hurt dog
's situation
. She
want
wants
to
see the dog. They leave
for
the
dog for
veterinarian's clinic.
Vaterinarian
see
hurt
dog
and
start
our
job.
The
veterinarian
sees
the
hurt
dog.
Sue and
your
her
friends are
cryinyg
crying
. They are afraid for
the
dog.
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A walk in the park
Sue is in the park with friends
.
Your
Her
friends are
playning
footbal
playing
football
. She is walking around
of
the park and
seeing
a
enjoying
the
view. When
finesh
your
she
finishes
her
walk
her
see
she
sees
a hurt dog. Running for
your
her
friends, she
speak
:
says,
"
My friends
,
I need
of
help.
Do
Can
you help me?
'
"
"
Yes, we
do
can
.
Where
What's wrong
?" She
speak
tells
them
and they run for the dog. They call
for
a
veterinarian and
describe
a
situation
of
the
tell
her
they
have
found
a
hurt dog. She
want
wants
to
see the dog. They leave the dog
for
at
the
veterinarian's clinic.
Vaterinarian
see
The
veterinarian examines the
hurt dog and
start
our
job
begins
to
treat him
.
Sue and
your
her
friends are
cryinyg
crying
. They are
afraid
for
worried
about
the
dog.
[You have written an interesting story!]
[You have written an interesting story!]
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