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Reading a book

the man was reading a book in the park. the chair in his back, the wind in his hair and the history in his heart. Everything was perfect.
Finishing the chapter he was in, he stand up and walk away with the book in his hands. After a few minutes a woman appears and gives him a umbrella. HIs umbrella. She give back the object and he thanks her.

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the The man was reading a book in the park. the The chair in was against his back, the wind was in his hair and the history was in his heart. Everything was perfect. Finishing the chapter he was in on , he stand stood up and walk walked away with the book in his hands hand . After a few minutes , a woman appears appeared and gives gave him a an umbrella . HIs ; his umbrella. She give gave it back the object , and he thanks thanked her.
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