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I went for a walk on sunday afternoon and the weather was pleasant: partly sunny, calm wind and so on, but it looked like it was going to rain. Anyway, I kept walking to a planned place in order to have a snack. However, i was lost because had walked more than should and, in short, i had needed to walk for another fifteen minutes to get back.
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A
day
Day
I went for a walk on
sunday
Sunday
afternoon and the weather was pleasant: partly sunny,
calm
wind
gentle
breeze
and so on,
but
yet
it looked like it was going to rain. Anyway, I kept walking to a planned place in order to have a snack. However,
i
I
[realised I]
was lost because
I
had walked
more
further
than
I
should
have
and, in short,
i
had
I
needed to walk for another fifteen minutes
[just]
to get back.
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Thanks!
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A day
I went for a walk on sunday afternoon and the weather was pleasant: partly sunny, calm wind and so on, but it looked like it was going to rain. Anyway, I kept walking to a planned place in order to have a snack. However,
i
I
was lost because had walked more than should and, in short,
i
I
had needed to walk for another fifteen minutes to get back.
Posted
Comment(s)
Thanks!
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