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Everybody knows that essencial to take care about the health. These days there are a big variable options of food at the supermarket. We need to choose right foods to improve our health. I know that sometimes, it was not easy to do but it´s very important.
I can say that my health is great. Last week I visited my doctor to check the results of my examination. It was very good and I felt grateful about it. Today I remembered that the last sandwich I ate was in January. What a long time ago!
Frequently I see at my work people eating sandwich and drinking soft drink. These people will have, as a result, some health problems in the future. I try to avoid that type of drink and alimentation because I know that it´s not good for my health.
To conclude, the way to have a healthy life is take good food habits since young. There are always a manner to improve your health. So, think a little bit before you to place an order at a snack bar.

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Linda.Quayle
Health
Everybody knows that essencial it is essential to take care about the of our health. These days there are is a big variable options huge variety of food options at the supermarket. We need to choose the right foods to improve our health. I know that sometimes , it was is not easy to do that, but it´s very important.
I can say that my health is great. Last week I visited my doctor to check the results of my examination.
It was They were very good and I felt grateful about it for that . Today I remembered that the last sandwich I ate was in January. What a long time ago!
Frequently I see
people at my work people eating sandwich sandwiches and drinking soft drink drinks . These people will have, as a result, some health problems in the future. I try to avoid that type of drink food and alimentation drink because I know that it´s not good for my health.
To conclude, the way to have a healthy life is
take to develop good food habits since young from an early age . There are is always a manner way to improve your health. So, think a little bit before you to place an order at a snack bar.
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Thank you!
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Health
Everybody knows that essencial it's essential to take care about the of health. These days there are a big variable variety of options of food at the supermarket. We need to choose the right foods food to improve our health. I know that sometimes, it was is not easy to do but it´s very important.
I can say that my health is great. Last week I visited my doctor to check the results of my examination. It was very good and I felt grateful about it. Today I remembered that the last sandwich I ate was in January. What a long time ago!
Frequently I see at my
work workplace people eating sandwich and drinking soft drink drinks . These people will have, as a result, some health problems in the future. I try to avoid that type of drink and alimentation because I know that it´s not good for my health.
To conclude, the way to have a healthy life is
take to adopt good food eating habits since young. There are always a manner way to improve your health. So, think a little bit twice before you to place an order at a snack bar.
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Thank you!
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