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My day off

Today was my day off. I would like to sleep a lot but I wake up early. I had very goods things to do. I organized my closet and take off some clothes for donation. It's always greatful for me to help another people.
After lunch, I rested a little in my bedroom. Few moments after, I looked for a new job at Internet. Also enjoyed to actualize my resume. I'll look for another job next week.
The weather was agradable. Started to rain in the afternoon. These days, there's no rain frequentely. Rarely rains and when it's rains , I feel grateful about it.
In conclusion, I can say that today was a wonderful day. I feel ready to begin the week. I hope that next day will be peaceble and calm.

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Today was my day off. I would like wanted to sleep a lot , but I wake woke up early. I had very goods important things to do. I organized my closet and take off took out some clothes for donation. It's always greatful satisfying for me to help another other people. After lunch, I rested a little in my bedroom. Few A few moments after later , I looked for a new job at Internet on the internet . Also enjoyed I also managed to actualize update my resume. I'll look for another job next week. The weather was agradable agreeable . Started It started to rain in the afternoon. These days, there it doesn ' s no t rain frequentely frequently . Rarely It rarely rains and , so when it 's rains does , I feel grateful about it. In conclusion, I can say that today was a wonderful day. I feel ready to begin the week. I hope that next day tomorrow will be peaceble peaceful and calm.
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