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DESCRIBE A CHILDHOOD MEMORY

When I was around 10, a Koeana series was a trend. Most of the people were obsessed with the movie, and they used to watch it every night. My friends and I were obsessed with the main character; she was an extraordinary girl and good in almost everything. For instance, she was terrific at cooking. We had made an imaginary world where we played the movie with each other. We used to mimic the way she was cooking. Everyone got a particular movie's character. This memory might not be memorable, but it is still one of the sweetest memories I have ever had.

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DESCRIBE A CHILDHOOD MEMORY
When I was around 10, a Koeana (Korean?) series was a trend. Most of the people were obsessed with the movie, and they used to watch it every night. My friends and I were obsessed with the main character ; she who was an extraordinary girl and good in at almost everything. For instance, she was terrific at cooking. We had made an imaginary world where we played the movie with each other. We used to mimic the way she was cooking. Everyone got a particular movie's character. This memory might not be memorable (consequential , noteworthy or momentous), but it is still one of the sweetest memories I have ever had.
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