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Sentences used in Business Writing (part 2)

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1) Patients received prescriptions for 10 days (10 counts) while each bottle has 20 counts of capsules.
2) There are more and more Product Complaints unrelated to ABC but pertaining to other business functions require their inputs.
3)Mary emphasized the importance of prioritizing the completion of Document A in System B if they are assigned to other functions.
4) Patients who are prescribed 1x50mg Hydrocholoride Tablets.
5) A storage condition deviation was opened due to the pallets not being cleaned before shipping.
6) This has no impact to the procedure.
7)There are delays and longer time in booking flights from Asia.
8)The document was completed late due to that there were a lot of returns of emails coming from the approver.
9) Decrease workload and allow them time to focus in the most significant items.
10) The process will improve documentation compliance between AAA Inc. and BBB Inc.
11) The project starts with bringing the infinity system into alignment.
12) There are significant delays in managing product returns and in follow-ups with the customers.
13)Report complaints promptly within three business days from the date of being aware of the complaint.
14) May expects that AAA.Inc will approach us requesting an update soon.

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Exactly, I accidentally crossed out an extra word.
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Sentences used in Business Writing (part 2)
Note: please feel free to correct my sentences completely if they don't sound good at all. Thank you and have a lovely day!
1) Patients received prescriptions for 10 days (10 counts) while each bottle has 20 counts of capsules.
2) There are more and more Product Complaints unrelated to ABC but pertaining to other business functions require their inputs.
3)Mary emphasized the importance of prioritizing the completion of Document A in System B if they are assigned to other functions.
4) Patients who are prescribed 1x50mg Hydrocholoride Tablets.
5) A storage condition deviation was opened due to the pallets not being cleaned before shipping.
6) This has no impact to the procedure.
7)There are delays and
longer time in booking wait times to book flights from Asia.
8)The document was completed late due
to that there were a lot of returns of returned emails coming from the approver.
9) Decrease workload and allow them time to focus
in on the most significant items.
10) The process will improve documentation compliance between AAA Inc. and BBB Inc.
11) The project starts with bringing the infinity system into alignment.
12) There are significant delays in managing product returns and
in follow-ups with the customers.
13)Report complaints promptly within three business days from the date of being aware of the complaint.
14) May expects that AAA.Inc will approach us requesting an update soon.
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Good Job
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Thank you for the correction! For sentence 8, would it be the document was completed late due to a lot of returns of returned emails coming from the approver. The "to"
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