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Three things that I am grateful

I want start this with privileges that I have, like having food or a house, it's simple things but it's big things. In sequence I so grateful and proud of people that in my life, especially a person who I met recently, I like him so much. My pets are so important to me too, so that's all.

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I gree! There is things important in our life. The love, pets, friend, and family. My wife is in my life at 16 ( sixteen) year’s, we will have a son, have two cats and some friends. We are happy.
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Three things Things that I am grateful Grateful For
I want to start this with by listing the privileges that I have, like having food or and a house , it's . These are simple things , but it's big things they are important . In sequence I so I am also grateful and proud of people that in my life, especially a person who I met recently , . I like him so much. My pets are so very important to me too , so that . That 's all.
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Three things that I am grateful for
I want to start this with the privileges that I have, like having food or a house, it's these are simple things but it's big things. In sequence I 'm so grateful for and proud of the people that are in my life, especially a person who I met recently, I like him so much. My pets are so important to me too, so that's all.
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