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Spring

Spring is the best season of the year. The flowers, so colorful with so many shapes and forms, make me want to stay and see them over and over again. After that season, the year is not the same anymore; the summer is brutal, the autumn is melancholic and the winter is hollow. Everything becomes so boring and bleak. The colors don't shine like before.

Just an opinion from a flower lover!

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They are not normally capitalized in English.
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leosmith
Spring
Spring is the best season of the year. The flowers, so colorful with so many shapes and forms, make me want to stay and see them over and over again. After that season spring , the year is not the same anymore; the summer is brutal, the autumn is melancholic and the winter is hollow. Everything becomes so boring and bleak. The colors don't shine like before.

Just an opinion from a flower lover!

(My correction was just a suggestion that I think makes it sound a tiny bit more natural; what you have also works.)
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Jacob.M
Spring
Spring is the best season of the year. The flowers, so colorful with so many shapes and forms, make me want to stay and see examine them over and over again. After that this season, the year is not the same anymore; the summer is brutal, the autumn is melancholic and the winter is hollow. Everything becomes so boring and bleak. The colors don't shine like before.

Just an opinion from a flower lover!


"See" could also be replaced with "look at" but doesn't fit with "over and over again" very well.
I removed "the" because I think your intention is to talk about summer in general, rather than a specific summer.

I also think that "after spring" sounds more natural.
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