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Brazil agriculture

Brazil has the strongest agropecuary system in the world. It produces a large amount of wheat, soilbean, coffee, oranges, meat, and sugarcane. It stands for 1/4 of GPD (gross domestic product). I am proud of this status because Brazil is a great agricultural country, but, on the other hand, it does not have incentives in other areas, such as technology. Every time I need to buy a smartphone or a smartwatch, I need to import them from China, and the great point that annoys me is that Brazilian current is called real and stands for five times less than dollar commercial. So I need to work five times more in order to acquire these goods.

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Good effort. I just have a few concerns: 1. I've never heard of agropecuary, but the Collins English-Portuguese dictionary translates agropecuária to agriculture or farming. 2. English language is slowly becoming more concise, so I could also write the last two sentences a little better (as it looks clunky to me).
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mncraig
Brazil agriculture
Brazil has the strongest agropecuary agricultural system in the world. It produces a large amount of wheat, soilbean soybean , coffee, oranges, meat, and sugarcane. It stands for 1/4 of GPD GDP (gross domestic product). I am proud of this status because Brazil is a great agricultural country, but, on the other hand, it does not have incentives specializations in other areas, such as technology. Every time I need to buy a smartphone or a smartwatch, I need to import them from China, and the great point that what annoys me is that the Brazilian current currency is called real Real and stands for five times less than dollar commercial the US Dollar commercially . So I need to work five times more in order to acquire these goods.
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I would write the final part as: Every time I need to buy a smartphone or a smartwatch, I need to import them from China, and what annoys me is that I need to work five times more to acquire these goods since the Brazilian Real is one-fifth of the US Dollar. You could directly site the exchange rate as: ...one Brazilian Real is worth 0.20 US Dollar (or 20 cents)... and your readers would still get the idea.
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