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I wrote some phrasal verbs in order to memorize them.

Life can be hard at times. But when you get it over, you can carry on.

Sincerely, when I was in high school, I did not catch math because it was not my favorite grade. Actually, I prefer: biology, portuguese, language, chemistry, history, and geography.

I really count on my friend to get a new job.

My mother bought me a shirt that is very beautiful to me. It is black and has some details in orange. The brand is adidas. She asked me to put it on to see if it fits on me.

My friend has a father. His father relys on him to survive. 

My motorcycle is very beautiful; it is red, and it is Yamaha brand. I adore rid a motorcycle it brings me a sensation of freedom. It runs on gas. In the future, I'll intend to buy one that works on electricity.

I'd like to become a boss at my job. I'll be very interested in taking on new responsibilities.
 

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helena.P.
I wrote some phrasal verbs in order to memorize them.
Life can be hard at times. But when you get > Sincerely, when I was in high school, I did not catch math because it over, you can carry on was not my favorite grade .
Sincerely, when I was in high school, I did not catch math because it was not my favorite
grade SUBJECT .

> Actually, I prefer: biology, portuguese, language, chemistry, history, and geography.
Actually, I really count on my friend prefer: biology, Portuguese, language, chemistry, history, and geography.
(note: When you are talking about a school subject in a general way, you do not need
to get capitalize it unless it is the name of a new job language. For example, math and chemistry do not need to be capitalized, but French and Spanish do need to be capitalized because they are proper nouns . ) > My mother bought me a shirt that is very beautiful to me. It is black and has some details in orange. The brand is adidas. She asked me to put it on to see if it fits on me.

My
mother bought me a shirt that is very beautiful to me. It is black and has some details in orange. The brand is Adidas. She asked me to put it on to see if it fits on me.
(Note: Do brands need to be capitalized? Capitalization: Trade and Brand Names. Capitalize specific brand names but not the product itself. Example: Kodak film.)


> My
friend has a father. His father relys on him to survive.
My
motorcycle is very beautiful; it is red friend has a father. His father RELIES on him to survive.
(note: I rely
, and you rely, he, she, it is Yamaha brand. relies, we rely...) > I adore rid a motorcycle it brings me a sensation of freedom.
I adore RIDING a motorcycle because/as it brings me a sensation of freedom.

>
It runs on gas. In the future, I'll intend to buy one that works on electricity.
I'd like to become a boss at my job. I'll be very interested in taking It runs on gas. In the future, I INTEND to buy one that works on new responsibilities electricity. Good job . Keep it up!
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