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Our pets
Let me tell you about our domestic animals. We have a hamster Alisa, Madagascar cockroaches, Chinchilla Cracker and turtle Sem. Cockroaches eat grass and berries, hamster - seeds, chinchilla - hay. A turtle eats only fresh fish.
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Cockroaches??? Aren't they food for the turtle?
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Madagascar cockroaches eat vegetables and grass. A turtle eats only fish.
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Our pets
Let me tell you about our
domestic animals
pets
. We have a hamster
named
Alisa, Madagascar cockroaches,
a
Chinchilla
called
Cracker and
a
turtle
named
Sem.
Cockroaches
The
cockroaches
eat grass and berries,
the
hamster
-
eats
seeds,
and the
chinchilla
-
eats
hay.
A
The
turtle eats only fresh fish.
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"Domestic animals" is strictly correct but it feels more natural to call them "pets." :)
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Thank you
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