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A life full of challenges
A life full of challenges is fun, to think that as every hour pass, you think on how to solve or end your problem. In that way, your life won’t be boring. Challenges are the things that makes our life exciting and thrilling. Exciting in a way that we end up thinking what would be the possible things that we can achieve or feel after seeing the problem. Thrilling in a way that we end up thinking what would be the next problem we will encounter. Let’s just say that challenges are best if they are present because without them we aren’t contented and happy. So, let’s be thankful.
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Hi Lea, I read your essay, making me really excited and thrilled of improving them. :)
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It's a very inspiring essay. Also, Challenges make us grow.
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Challenges make our success in life, and Challenges are what make life interesting. Overcoming them is what makes them meaningful.
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A life full of challenges
A life full of challenges is fun
because
,
to think that
as every hour pass, you
need to
think
on
about
how to solve or end your
problem
problems
. In that way, your life won’t be boring. Challenges are the things that
makes
make
our
life
lives
the most
exciting and thrilling. Exciting
in
a
way
that
we
end
up thinking what would be
because
they
make
us
think
of
the possible things that we can achieve or feel after
seeing
the
problem
solving
our
problems
. Thrilling
in
a way that
because
we end up thinking what
would
might
be the next problem we will encounter. Let’s just say that
challenges
are
life
is
best
if
they
when
challenges
are present because without them we aren’t
contented
and
as
content
or
happy. So, let’s be thankful
we have challenges
.
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A life full of challenges
A life full of challenges is fun, to think that as every hour
pass
passes
, you think on how to solve or end your problem. In that way, your life won’t be boring. Challenges are the things that
makes
make
our life exciting and thrilling. Exciting in a way that we end up thinking
what
would be
about
the possible things that we can achieve or feel after seeing the problem. Thrilling in a way that we end up thinking what would be the next problem we will encounter. Let’s just say that challenges are best if they are present because without them we aren’t contented and happy. So, let’s be thankful.
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A life full of challenges
A life
full
taken
of challenges is fun, to
think
deem
that as every hour
pass
track
, you
think
consider
on
how
whence
to solve or end your
problem
obstacle
. In that way, your life won’t be
boring
tedious
. Challenges are the things that
makes
make
our life exciting and thrilling.
Exciting
Inspiring
in a way that we end up thinking
about
what would be the
possible
potential
things that we can achieve or feel after seeing the
problem
dilemma
. Thrilling in a way that we end up
thinking
believing
what would be the next
problem
intricacy
we will encounter. Let’s just say that
challenges
provocations
are best if they are
present
started
because without them we aren’t contented and
happy
felicitous
. So, let’s be
thankful
overwhelmed
.
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