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Something in the way

From my point of view I have tree decision that I am felling regret, are: my wedding, my university, and my car. I know they are critical points to analyze , thus, why not explain it better to fell good inside?
First of all I'd like to open my heart to say that my weeding failed . I did know why but the things went wrong somehow. I got married on January 21 th, 2019. At the beginning everything looks good both work in different companies and at the weekend we got out to have some fun. My wife is called Gisele she is a beautiful woman she looks like a famous actress that I didn't remember the name. Let me describe her she is : blue eyes, white skin and curb hair. I think some times that we broke apart because it was my foul, but I would rather sometimes put the blame on her. The fact is that she cheated on me and I considered it the last straw.
Other point I wish point it out is my university. At the beginning I thought that my course was a good deal. My course was called plastic technology. I spent tree yeas doing this course . In that moment I lived at São Caetano city. At night I used get on my motorcycle to get classes at university São Bernardo do Campo city. I am not lying about this curse in many aspects as: I got good friends , good teachers, good infrastructure and so on. But in reality now I am unemployed and the work market is so hard to get in.
Moreover I feel regret because I bought I car called ford kA from Ford Company. But getting in detail its engine motor has broken and the mechanic said that I'll need to rise 6.000 Reais. Honestly I don't have this money, I'll spent a lot of months to save this quantity. thank you:)

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I'm sorry to hear about these. :( All these shall pass in time.
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I'm sorry to hear about these Joao.
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Something in the way
From my point of view Recently I have tree decision made three decisions that I am felling regret, these are: my wedding, my university, and my car. I know they are critical points important things to analyze analyse , thus so , why not explain it better to fell good them more fully, so I may feel better inside?
First of all I'd like to open my heart to say that my
weeding wedding failed . I did didn't know why but the things went wrong somehow. I got married on January 21 th, 21st 2019. At the beginning everything looks looked good , we both work worked in different companies and at the weekend we got out to have some fun. My wife is called Gisele she is a beautiful woman she looks like a famous actress that whose name I didn don 't remember the name . Let me describe her she is has : blue eyes, white skin and curb curly hair. I think some times that we broke apart up because it was my foul fault , but I would rather sometimes put the blame on her. The fact is that she cheated on me and I considered it this to be the last straw.
Other point I wish point it out Secondly is my university. At the beginning I thought that my course was a good deal. My The course was called plastic technology. I spent tree yeas three years doing this course . In At that moment time I lived at in São Caetano city . At night I used to get on my motorcycle to get go to classes at the university in São Bernardo do Campo city . I am not lying about this curse in regretting the course it had many good aspects such as: I got good friends , good teachers, good infrastructure and so on. But in reality now I am unemployed and the work market is so hard to get in to .
Moreover Finally, I feel regret because I bought I a car called ford kA from the Ford Company. But getting in detail I have discovered its engine motor has broken and the mechanic said that I'll need to rise raise 6.000 Reais. Honestly I honestly don't have this money, I It 'll spent a lot of take me many months to save this quantity amount . thank Thank you:)
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Sorry to hear about your recent woes. It's all experience that makes us what we are. As the saying goes: "When you hit rock bottom the only way is up". 😎
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Nice, thank you I wish you have a nice day.
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good corrections @draenog.jon but I would say ''First of all I'd like to open my heart to say that my MARRIAGE failed. I DONT know why
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Ha! So would I 🙄. My mind was obviously on my own garden where the weeding always fails 😁
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janestrut
Something in the way
From my point of view I have tree decision made decisions that I am felling regret , are making : my wedding, my university, and my car. I know they there are critical points to analyze , thus, why not explain it better to fell good inside them ?
First of all I'd like to open my heart to say that my weeding failed
. I did don’t know why , but the things went wrong somehow. I got married on January 21 th, 2019. At the beginning everything looks looked good . We both work worked in different companies and at the weekend we got out to have some fun. My wife is was called Gisele she is . She was a beautiful woman and she looks looked like a famous actress that whose name I didn't remember the name . Let me describe her she is : blue eyes, white skin and curb curly hair. I think some times sometimes that the reason we broke apart because it was my foul fault , but I would rather sometimes put the blame on her. The fact is that she cheated on me and I considered it the last straw.
Other Another point I wish to point it out is my university. At the beginning I thought that my course was a good deal. My course was called plastic technology. I spent tree three yeas doing this course . In At that moment I lived at in the city of São Caetano city . At night I used get on my motorcycle to get go to classes at university in the city of São Bernardo do Campo city . I am not lying about this curse in many aspects as: I got had good friends , good teachers, good infrastructure and so on. But in reality , now I am unemployed and the work market is so hard to get in into .
Moreover Lastly, I feel regret because I bought I car called ford kA from Ford Company. But getting in detail its engine motor has was broken , and the mechanic said that I'll need to rise pay 6 . , 000 Reais reais . Honestly , I don't have this money , ! I'll spent spend a lot of months to save this quantity.
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you for reading my story :)
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I’m sorry to hear about this. I hope things look up from here (get better)!
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