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My first day of writing.

Today is my first day of writing. Normally, I used to only listening and take some lessons on Duolingo, but I noticed that writing is essential to unlocking fluence.
Today makes almost a year since I become to start learn how to speak English fluently, it’s a challenge because my mother language is Portuguese and my contact with English is medium. I see English in publicity or product packing. When I had my first contact with the language I was so excited to meet something new. Now, I see it is not that simple. Requires dedication, a lot of studies, and diary motivation because learning a new language is a hard challenge. But I’m headstrong and in a few months I will certainly become fluent in English and later in French, and after that in Italian and to finish it, Chinese. Thank you for listening to me.

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All the best buddy
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Well if that is your first time of writing then you've done a super job 👍.
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Great try Rafael! Keep on writing. :)
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Goodluck friend :)
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My first day of writing First Day Of Writing .
Today is my first day of writing. Normally, I used to only listening listen and take some lessons on Duolingo, but I noticed that writing is essential to unlocking fluence.
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makes is almost a year since I become to start learn started learning how to speak English fluently, it’s a challenge because my mother language is Portuguese and my contact with English language is medium not much . I see English in publicity advertisments or product packing. When I had my first contact with the language I was so excited to meet experience something new. Now, I see it is not that simple. Requires It requires dedication, a lot of studies study , and diary daily motivation because learning a new language is a hard challenge. But I’m headstrong and in a few months I will certainly become fluent in English and later in French, and after that in Italian and to finish it, Chinese. Thank you for listening to me.
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My first day First Time of writing Writing .
Today is my first day time of writing. Normally, I used to only 'd only practise listening and take some lessons on Duolingo, but I 've noticed that writing is essential to unlocking fluence achieving fluency .
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makes is almost a year since I become started to start learn how to speak English fluently, it’s a challenge because my mother native language is Portuguese and my contact with English is medium minimal . I only see English in publicity material or on product packing packaging . When I had my first contact with the language I was so excited to meet encounter something new. Now, I can see it is not going to be that simple. Requires It requires dedication, a lot of studies studying , and diary motivation time management because learning a new language is a hard challenge very challenging . But I’m headstrong and in a few months I will certainly become fluent in English and later in French, and after that in Italian and to finish it finally , Chinese. Thank you for listening to me reading this far .
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You can say either 'native language' or 'mother tongue'. Not overly sure what you meant by 'diary motivation' I have assumed that you meant finding time to fit studying in around everyday life. In which case that is 'time management' if you were referring to the 'motivation' then you could say 'a high level of motivation' or 'plenty of motivation'
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My first day of writing.
Today is my first day of writing here . Normally, I used to would only listening listen and take some lessons on Duolingo, but I noticed that writing is essential to unlocking fluence my language fluency .
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My first day of First Time Writing writing.
Today is my first day of writing time to write in English . Normally Usually , I used to only only do listening and take some lessons on Duolingo, but I noticed that writing is essential to unlocking fluence developing fluency .
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My first day of time writing.
Today is my first day of writing time to write in English . Normally , I used to only listening listen and take some lessons on Duolingo, Duo lingo but I noticed that writing is essential to in unlocking fluence in English .
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makes marks almost a year since I become begun to start learn how to speak English fluently , it . It ’s a challenge because my mother native language is Portuguese and my contact with knowledge of English is medium. I hear and see English language in publicity or product packing public media . When I had my first contact with the class in English language I was so excited to meet something new new things . Now, I see it It is not that simple . Requires , it requires dedication, a lot of studies , and diary daily motivation because learning a new language is a hard challenge. But I’m headstrong and in a few months I will certainly become fluent in English and later in French , and after that in Italian and to finish it , up in Chinese. Thank you for listening to me.
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