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Alafy.Araujo

My Neighbors Are Too Many Noisy

Hi there.
I've been living in the same home for 13 years. I'd many neighbors and made some friends. I used to play at the street with some kids that lived close to me, all them are younger than me.
Eventually, I began to drift apart from my neighbors because I was hung out with people of the same age as me.
I recently realized that I like stay at home studying English, watching movies with my family, etc.
Although, there's one thing that annoy me, It's the noise of kids at the street. They yell too much and, sometimes, throw stones on the houses.
It sounds like they didn't grow up. When I used to play with them we never bother the neighbors. It's a little odd to see that children's play changed like this.
Thanks for the corrections.

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deleted.89604
Unfortunately when you start to become annoyed by the sound of children playing in the street it is a sign that you are becoming old and potentially grumpy(and yes this is experience talking). You must resist this temptation at all costs otherwise you run the risk of becoming a moaning old misery just like that one neighbour everyone remembers from their childhood! You know the one - the one that wouldn't let you have your ball back. 😱😱😱😬🤣
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leosmith
But Jon, That's my goal in life :)
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deleted.89604
Well Leo, you must be an aspiring Victor Meldrew (https://youtu.be/_SMi4-x2Ff8) then, have you achieved this status yet? I am postponing the seemingly inevitable and am firmly still in the denial stage.
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july.lullalove
I totally agree with how the kids nowadays are a bit unruly and sometimes incapable of being considerate of others. My parents and grandparents have always expressed their dismay on how the new generation is way too laidback and seemed too narcissistic. I think their behavior is affected by unrealistic trends in social media.
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leosmith
Lol, funny video Jon. No, I'm not quite there yet.
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deleted.89604
My Neighbors Children Are Too Many Noisy
Hi there.
I've been living in the same home for 13 years. I 'd have many neighbors neighbours and made some friends. I used to play at in the street with some kids that lived close to me by , all of them are were younger than me.
Eventually, I began to drift apart from my neighbors neighbours because I was hung started to hang out with people of the same age as me.
 Recently I recently 've realized that I like to stay at home studying English, watching movies with my family, etc.
 Although There is , there's however, one thing that annoy annoys me, It's that is the noise of the kids at in the street. They yell too much and, sometimes, throw stones on at the houses.
It sounds like they didn haven 't grow grown up. When I used to play with them , we never bother bothered the neighbors neighbours . It's a little odd to see that how children's play has changed ( like this )/[so much] .
Thanks for the corrections.
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