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How to broaden your understanding..?

It's been a while since I have written here.
Actually ,I am always struggling to write Essay because of my poor English. but I appreciate some of you in advance since I know you are helping me out to correct my mistakes.

Anyway,
If it rains from the sky , someone can take the rain with a bowl a lot , but someone probably can't get much the rain water with the same size of bowl . Who will not be able to get any drop of the rain? ..it's the guy who holding the bowl upside down.

What makes the difference of the amount of rain water?
It's because the difference of experience in life
So If you want to broaden your understanding . As times go you can broaden your understanding base on your experience in life.
For example, if you took some lecture or some book in younger age than now probably you might not able to understand the meaning of it but if you listen the same lecture or read the book again now probably you can understand what does it mean.


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How to broaden your understanding ..? .
It's been a while since I have written here. Actually , , I am always struggling struggle to write Essay essays because of my poor English. but But I appreciate some of you your help in advance since I know you are helping me out to will correct my mistakes.

Anyway,
If if it rains from the sky , someone people can take catch the rain with a bowl a lot , but someone probably can't get much the rain water with the amount of water they catch is limited by the same size base of the bowl . Who will not be able to get any even a drop of the rain? ..it's the The guy who 's holding the his bowl upside down.

What makes the difference of This is analogous to the amount of rain water?
It's because the
difference of experience in life So experience. If you want to broaden your understanding . As , as times go by, you can broaden your understanding base on , or your experience in life.

For example, if you took some lecture or
read some book in at a younger age than now probably , you might not able to understand have understood the meaning of it then, but if you listen to the same lecture or read the book again now probably , you can might understand what does it mean means .


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