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Adventures
I like to have adventures in both : cities and nature. Adventures in cities is funny, because I can meet other people and friends,I can go in library, I can cook and I can have internet . Adventures in nature is cool, because I can climb trees, I can eat fruits of trees and I can play popular children's games .. For exemplo: hide and seek, tag and other.
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Well done. Something to know - 'funny' is something you laugh at, but 'fun' is enjoyable and happy. They are very different.
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Adventures
I like to have adventures in both
:
cities and nature. Adventures in cities
is
funny
are
fun
, because I can meet
friends and
other people
and friends,
,
I can go
in
to
the
library, I can cook and I can
have
use
the
internet . Adventures in nature
is
are
cool, because I can climb trees, I can
eat
fruits
of trees
find
fruit
and I can play popular children's games
..
For exemplo
,
for
example
: hide and seek, tag and other
games
.
Posted
Adventures
I like to have adventures in both
:
cities and nature. Adventures in cities is
funny
fun
, because I can meet other people and friends,
I can go
in
into
the
library, I can cook and I can have internet . Adventures in nature is cool, because I can climb trees, I can eat fruits of trees and I can play popular children's games
..
.
For
exemplo:
example,
hide and seek, tag
,
and other
games
.
Posted
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Adventures
I like to have adventures
in
both
:
in
cities and
in
nature. Adventures in
cities
is
funny,
the
city
are
fun
because I can meet other people and friends,
I can go
in
to
the
library, I can cook
,
and I can have internet
access
. Adventures in nature is cool
,
because I can climb trees, I can eat fruits of
those
trees
,
and I can play popular children's games
..
.
For
exemplo
example
: hide and seek, tag
,
and other
children's games
.
Posted