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Education Today and in The Future
The world is advancing every day and it really freaks me out. We don't know what can happen tomorrow. Chances are the schools will use more technology and students will do all of their exams on the smartphone.
The more time passes, the more different our world gets. These days, students are doing their tasks on the internet because of Covid-19. It shows us that the students can do everything without go to school. However, I think we need face-to-face classes, nevertheless. When I was a student I loved go to my school and I wouldn't like it to change.
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Attending school is more than just for an academic education, it also is for social education and interaction. While the internet has certainly opened up the world of education, allowing possibilities that could only be dreamt about a few years ago, I agree with you as it would not bode well for a healthy future society. We will be in a world of well-educated, lonely people who have absolutely no idea how to interact with their fellow human beings. A recipe for a dystopian future if ever there was one.
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Education Today and in
The
the
Future
The world is advancing every day
,
and it really freaks me out. We don't know what
(
can
)/[may]
happen tomorrow. Chances are
the
,
schools will use more technology and students will do all of their exams on
the
a
smartphone.
The more time passes, the more ( different our world gets. )/[our world changes.] These days, students are doing theirtasks
work
on the internet because of Covid-19. It
(
shows us
)/[demonstrates]
that the students can do everything without
go
actually
(going
to
)/[attending]
school. However, I think we
still
need face-to-face classes
,
nevertheless. When I was a student
,
I loved
to
go to my school and I wouldn't like
it
that
to change.
The more time passes, the more ( different our world gets. )/[our world changes.] These days, students are doing their
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Education Today and in
The
the
Future
The world is advancing every day
,
and it really freaks me out. We don't know what
can
could
happen tomorrow. Chances are
the
,
schools will use more technology
,
and students will do all of their exams on
the smartphone
smartphones
. The more time passes, the more
different
our world
gets
changes
. These days, students are doing their tasks on the internet because of Covid-19. It shows us that
the
students
they
can do everything
they need to do
without
go
going
to school. However, I think we need face-to-face classes
, nevertheless
. When I was a student
,
I loved
go
going
to my school
,
and I
wouldn't
like
it
to change
would
never
change
that
.
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Excellent work - my comments are suggestions only.
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