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Family meeting

Today my parents first met my boyfriend's parents. It was a pleasant afternoon/evening. They prepared delicious snacks like cake, cheese bread and chiken puff. My boyfriend is very polite and concerned about drinking options. He offered four options of beverage. The most important thing is it seems our parents will be friends.

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Family meeting
Today my parents first met my boyfriend's parents for the first time . It was a pleasant afternoon/evening. They prepared delicious snacks like cake, cheese bread , and chiken chicken puff. My boyfriend is very polite and concerned about drinking options. He offered four options of beverage. The most important thing is Most Importantly it seems our parents will be friends.
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Family meeting
Today my parents first met my boyfriend's parents for the first time . It was a pleasant afternoon/evening. They prepared delicious snacks like such as cake, cheese bread and chiken chicken puff. My boyfriend is very polite and was concerned about drinking options. He offered four options of beverage. The most important thing is that it seems our parents will be friends.
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