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My Second Essay (04/08/2020)
Hi everyone!
I comeback and I will talk to you what happend with my life today.
I woke up, took a shower and I washed my hair. How I always do, I studied the subjects (Math, English and History) today.
I watch a amazing miniseries called "Self Made" in portuguese is "A vida e a história de Madame CJ Walker" talk about the first womam who became a millionaire in the united states and at the film this woman confront many thing like racism, betrayal and life difficulties. She pass for many obstacles to get where she got and I really recommend for you all watch this miniseries. This woman revolutionized.
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This sounds like an interesting series. Is this available on Netflix?
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Wow. Where do you watch it ?
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My Second Essay (04/08/2020)
Hi everyone!
Icomeback
have
come back
and I will talk to you
about
what
happend
with
happened
in
my life today.
I woke up, took a shower andI
washed my hair.
How
That's
what
I always do, I studied
the subjects (Math
Maths
, English and History
)
today.
Iwatch
a
watched
an
amazing
miniseries
series
called "Self Made" in
portuguese
Portuguese
is "A
vida
Vida
e a história de Madame CJ Walker"
talk
which
talked
about the first
womam
woman
who became a millionaire in the
united
states
United
States
and
at
in
the film this woman
confront
confronted
many
thing
difficulties
like racism,
betrayal
betrayals
and life
difficulties
struggles
. She
pass
for
passed
many obstacles to
get
reach
where she got and I
really
recommend
for
you all watch this
miniseries
seriess
. This woman revolutionized
an era
.
I
I woke up, took a shower and
I
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My Second Essay (04/08/2020)
Hi everyone!
Icomeback
am
back
and I will talk to you
about
what
happend
with
happened
in
my life today.
I woke up, took a shower andI
washed my hair. How I always do, I studied the subjects
(
Math, English and History
) today
. I
watch
a
also
watched
an
amazing
miniseries
mini-series
called "Self Made"
,
in portuguese
is
it's
"A vida e a história de Madame CJ Walker"
talk
.
It
talks
about the first
womam
woman
who became a millionaire in the
united
states
United
States
and
at
in
the
film
this
series
the
woman
confront
confronted
many
thing
things
like racism, betrayal and
other
life difficulties. She
pass
for
got
past
many obstacles to get where she got
and
.
I really recommend
for
you
all
to
watch this
miniseries
mini-series
.
This
The
woman
revolutionized
advocates revolution
.
I
I woke up, took a shower and
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My Second Essay (04/08/2020)
Hi everyone!
Icomeback
'm
back
and I will talk to you what
happend
happened
with
my life
today.
I woke up, took a shower and I washed my hair.How
I
did what
I always do, I studied the subjects (Math, English and History) today.
Then, Iwatch
a
watched
an
amazing miniseries called "Self Made
.
"
in
portuguese
In
Portuguese
it
is "A vida e a história de Madame CJ Walker
.
"
talk
It
talks
about the first
womam
woman
who became a millionaire in the
united
United
states
and
at
.
In
the film
,
this woman confront many thing like racism, betrayal and life difficulties. She
pass
for
passed
many obstacles to get where she got
and
.
I really recommend for you all
to
watch this miniseries. This woman
revolutionized
is a revolutionary
.
I
I woke up, took a shower and I washed my hair.
Then, I
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