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Adventures

I like to have adventures in both : cities and nature. Adventures in cities is funny, because I can meet other people and friends,I can go in library, I can cook and I can have internet . Adventures in nature is cool, because I can climb trees, I can eat fruits of trees and I can play popular children's games .. For exemplo: hide and seek, tag and other.

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Well done. Something to know - 'funny' is something you laugh at, but 'fun' is enjoyable and happy. They are very different.
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Belisarius
Adventures
I like to have adventures in both : cities and nature. Adventures in cities is funny are fun , because I can meet friends and other people and friends, , I can go in to the library, I can cook and I can have use the internet . Adventures in nature is are cool, because I can climb trees, I can eat fruits of trees find fruit and I can play popular children's games .. For exemplo , for example : hide and seek, tag and other games .
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Aussie.B
Adventures
I like to have adventures in both : cities and nature. Adventures in cities is funny fun , because I can meet other people and friends, I can go in into the library, I can cook and I can have internet . Adventures in nature is cool, because I can climb trees, I can eat fruits of trees and I can play popular children's games .. . For exemplo: example, hide and seek, tag , and other games .
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