Write & CorrectEnglish
The Beach
Hi, I'm Ana and I'll teel you about my lovely moment. I was in South of Brazil a 6 years ago to vacation with my dad and his wife, and my little brother. We were in Florianópolis to visitate some places, especilly some beach's. One day, in the beach, I was swining by myself and this moment it's so clear to me, it's a really significant memory, I feel so free and conecting with nature. Anyways, Ioved that moment and I miss the beach.
Posted
Corrections
The Beach
Hi, I'm Ana and I'll
teel
tell
you about
my
a
lovely moment
I had
. I was in
South
of
southern
Brazil
a
6
six
years ago
to
on
vacation with my dad
and
,
his wife, and my little brother. We were in Florianópolis to
visitate
visit
some places,
especilly
especially
some
beach's
beaches
. One day,
in
at
the beach, I was
swining
swimming
by myself
,
and this moment
it's
remains
so clear to me
,
;
it's a really significant memory
,
.
I
feel
felt
so free and
conecting
connected
with nature.
Anyways
Anyway
,
I
Ioved that moment and I miss the beach.
Posted