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My garden
I'm surprised at how large the quantity of life is in my garden because I used to see several types of life there, such as lizards, aunts, birds, butterflies, and hommiebirds. In terms of plants and flowers, my garden has a lot of grass, sunflowers, quaresmeira trees, acerola trees, roses, and. In terms of birds that I realized have been seen, they are: sparrows, doves, hommiebirds, butterflies, woodpeckers, hawks etc.
I take care of my garden, pruning it, and feeding birds. I love my garden it brings into my life a sensation of spiritual peace, and it is full of life.
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My garden
I'm surprised at how
large
the
quantity
many
types
of
life
is
living
things
are
in my garden
because
.
I
used
to
see
see
(you
began
with the present tense, so continue in the present)
several types of life there, such as lizards,
aunts
ants
, birds, butterflies, and
hommiebirds
hummingbirds
. In terms of plants and flowers, my garden has a lot of grass, sunflowers, quaresmeira trees, acerola trees,
and
roses
, and
. In terms of birds that I
realized
have
been
seen,
they
there
are
:
sparrows, doves,
hommiebirds
hummingbirds
, butterflies, woodpeckers, hawks
etc
,
and more
.
("etc" is used in a list, not in proper writing)
I take care of my garden,
by
pruning it
,
and feeding
the
birds. I love my garden
;
it brings into my life a sensation of spiritual peace, and it is full of life.
I take care of my garden
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