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Life
Life is beautiful but not always easy, it has problems, too, and the challenge lies in facing them with courage, letting the beauty of life act like a balm, which makes the pain bearable, during trying times, by providing hope
Happiness, sorrow, victory, defeat, day-night are the two sides of me. Similarly life is full of moments of joy, pleasure, success and comfort punctuated by misery, defeat, failures and problems. There is no human being on Earth, strong, powerful, wise or rich, who has not experienced, struggle, suffering or failure.
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Life is a value along the days we live.
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Life
Life is beautiful but not always easy
,
it
has
.
It
presents
problems
,
too, and the challenge lies in facing them with courage, letting the beauty of life act like a balm
,
which makes the pain bearable
,
during trying times
,
by providing hope
.
Happiness,
and
sorrow, victory
,
and
defeat, day
-
and
night
are
define
the two sides of me.
Similarly
life
Life
is full of moments of joy, pleasure, success and comfort punctuated by misery, defeat, failures and problems. There is no human being on Earth,
whether
strong, powerful, wise or rich, who has not experienced, struggle, suffering or failure.
Happiness
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I probably didn't help you much here. It's very poetic, and more of a matter of personal preference how to organize it I think. Great work!
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Life
Life is beautiful but not always easy
,
it
.
It
has problems
,
too
,
and the challenge lies in facing them with courage, letting the beauty of life act like a balm
,
which
that
makes the pain bearable
,
during trying times
,
by providing hope
Happiness,
and
sorrow, victory
,
and
defeat,
and
day
-
and
night are the two sides of me. Similarly
,
life is full of moments of joy, pleasure, success and comfort punctuated by misery, defeat, failures and problems. There is no human being on Earth,
no matter how
strong, powerful, wise or rich, who has
not
never
experienced
,
struggle, suffering or failure.
Happiness
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It *is* rather nice, isn't it? There's a rhythm to it that I can't quite follow but leaves an impression.
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Life
Life is beautiful but not
as
always
easy
as it seems
, it has
problems,
struggles
too
; however
,
and
the
challenge
lies
challenges
lie
in facing them with courage, letting the beauty of life act like a balm,
which
makes
though
making
the pain bearable
,
during trying times,
by
providing hope
and encouragement.
Happiness, sorrow, victory, defeat, day-nightare
representing
the two sides of me. Similarly
,
life is full of moments of joy, pleasure, success and comfort punctuated by misery, defeat, failures and problems. There is no human being on
Earth,
earth
-
strong, powerful, wise
or
and
rich, who has not experienced
,
struggle
pain
, suffering
or
failure
and
struggle but this is what makes life beautiful
.
Happiness, sorrow, victory, defeat, day-night
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Life
Life is beautiful but not always easy
,
it
.
It
has problems
,
too, and the challenge lies in facing them with courage
,
letting
.
Let
the beauty of life act like a balm,
which
makes
to
make
the pain bearable,
by providing hope
during trying times
,
by
providing
hope
Happiness,
.
Happiness
and
sorrow, victory
,
and
defeat, day
-
and
night
,
they
are the two sides of me.
Similarly
life
Life
is full of moments of joy, pleasure, success and comfort punctuated by misery, defeat, failures and problems. There is no human being on
Earth
earth
,
whether
strong, powerful, wise or rich, who has not experienced
,
any
struggle, suffering or failure.
Happiness,
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